octo-boy (who still needs a name) and szyel o 3 o octo doesn't know if he should be scared or not so he's just confused
they're supposed to be in a pool-thing where the octo boy lives it's in part of vincent's lab bc vincent likes anything weird so yeah like a sloping pool edge not like a wall i hope it looks like that at least i tried e o e;;
the composition of the tentacles and whatever appendages looks pretty good and the water looks okay, though I think the shape of the waves could be pushed more for greater impact. At first I didn't understand the background, but now I see what you're saying, though perhaps the edge of the pool, or maybe a back wall or something would cement the perspective/scene. overall, very interesting and I like the colouring.
I'm not trying to be rude about it, and I do appreciate that you are trying to help... I don't know a better way to say it- so sorry if I do sound rude about it- but I don't really want critiques unless I'm asking for them. I'm not against them or anything, and like I said I do appreciate it, but I'm just not looking for them right now.
sorry, I wasn't trying to be rude either. It's just my philosophy not to give comments to people if I have to censor them. If people choose not to take my advice they are absolutely free to do so, I just think they should allow it to be said. I would rather give comments to people who like feedback. Good luck with your art